Many may think, and I agree, that young people are not capable of playing important roles in government. In my opinion, a government needs to run by people who have a strong sense of responsibility, diverse experience, and strict moral standards. Of course, we can find those who possess these qualities from childhood, but it is not common.
In terms of the roles of government, it is very important to understand what is necessary to protect people’s lives. Elderly people have been carrying on their lives for a long time, embracing many situations. They have been through various issues from direct and indirect experience, allowing society to thrive by keeping rules or fighting for justice. They understand what is a human right, how to protect it. On the contrary, young people are lack of problem-solving skills. It is because they have technically less opportunity to broaden their eyesight than elders.
Secondly, it is too much burden for young people to take an important position in the government. In a way, giving a serious title to a young person can keep him/her from a youth life. There must be judgments by the public, criticism from the other political party, and struggling with various issues. If a young person takes a chance to work in the government, even if it is only an internship, he or she might feel overwhelmed from the beginning. In that case, he or she will face too many problems to solve before they have the ability to distinguish right from wrong.
In conclusion, It is more reliable that elderly people run a government based on their experience.
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전 writing 시험을 보면 5.5 가 나옵니다...... 다른것들은 6.5~7.5에서 왔다갔다하는데. 어떻게 올려햐는지 잘 모르겠어요.
시간때문인것같아요. 빨리 쓰는 연습이 부족해서,, 위의 글은 거의 50분 걸려쓰고
항상 Task1 을 10분 남았을 때 시작해서 점검도못하고 냅니다. 속도는 연습해야 한다고 생각 합니다만
목표는 writing 에서 7.0 을 받아야 overall 목표 7.5 정도를 채울것 같아서..
첨삭 부탁드립니다. 저의 나쁜 습관이 보이시면 알려주시면 감사드리겠습니다.
감사합니다. 좋은 하루 되세요.