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Recently, more and more people decide to be self-employed instead of being hired by certain companies. There are several reasons for this and a few foreseeable drawbacks which I will deliver meticulously (이런 단어까지 쓰실 필요 없습니다.) in the paragraphs below. To begin with, one of the reasons of this rising phenomenon is that because of the pandemic Pandemic, it is difficult to move from a place to another. People are afraid of tentative infections of Corona virus so they rather choose to stay in their house by employing themselves. Moreover, these days people want to run their own business since they can decide whatever they want to try. Generally, people who are employed by a company believe themselves that the realization of their life goals and keeping a work-life balance are disrupted by their companies. Due to this, they rather seek the to freedom of choice regarding their future situations and their present economic status. That is why people choose to be self employed. Things, however, must be considered when a person decide to move out from a company and run his own business. First, in the case of not considering possible future obstacles, it could be drastically difficult for a person to earn his money. One of my friends who recently moved out from a company and opened his own cafe was severely damaged due to his delays in paying the store's monthly rent. Since he had not had any plans to deal with this type of possible damages, he has been struggling constantly for months. Second, for a person who is self-employed, it might be hard for him to get motivation. Sometimes, it is crucial to get stimulation from others to improve one's competency. Unlike a company, however, there are less chances to work as a team have team works for a person who runs his business by himself. So (문장을 and but so로 시작하는 것은 좋지 않습니다.) having a self-driving force might be uneasy. All in all, even though people, nowadays, make decisions to be self-employed for certain reasons, it seems that some shortcomings are underlying at this.
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