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This line graph illustrates information about the trend of gym membership between males and females from 1980 to 2010.
In 1980, approximately 2000 (숫자가 네 자리를 넘어가는 경우 2,000과 같이 쉼표를 쳐주셔야 합니다. 연도 제외,다른데에도 싹 다 바꿔주세요!) men were registered to gym membership, which was two times higher than women’s membership whereas under than 1000 men were registered in membership in 2010, which was far lower than women’s and shown the lowest registration during the period. (이게 하나의 문장이죠. 이럴 경우 매우 곤란해집니다. 아무리 못해도 한 번은 끊어주셔야 합니다.)
The number of member in male had been unpredictably changed during the period, showing two peaks - 4000 in 1985 and 5000, which represented the highest registration, in 2005, respectively, while the number of women who have gym membership had gradually risen from 1000 in 1980 to just under 2000 in 2010. (얘도 마찬가지입니다. 너무 길어요.) The number of registered women surpassed men in 1992 and peacked almost 3000 of registration in 1995, whereas the number were surpassed by men in 2000.
Overall, men generally had more gym memberships than women apart from the periods between in 1992 and in 2000 and around 2010. (서론 밑으로 올려주시면 되며, 모든 태스크1에도 마찬가지입니다.)
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