Most or people all around the world stick to social media to share their everyday lives in all around world are stick to the social media for sharing everyday lives these days. There are some pros and cons to this; one is convenience of communicating, the other is confusing between real and cyber world.
I will start with the good points of using social media. It is a very useful development in every-day life such as schools, works, especially in the COVID-19 period. These days people are finding ti much harder to moving or gathering than we used to do. People often use cyber meeting systems to communicate others and many social media companies company provide these services. Therefore we can easily chat with friends and hold meetings to discuss business concerns with other business partners.
Even though social media helps our life make better, there are also concerning points that is some people get addicted to social media and they finally get confuse which life is genuine among cyber and real world. They spend a lot of time to show off in the cyber world and are gradually losing their own identities. For example I often heard from the news that the teens had stayed at home for a quit long period time without doing anything with doing nothing but chatting with their friends or person whom they met in the computers and express their stress to their parents who pushed pushing them to get back to real life.
Overall, a social media could help our life become better than before, too much use of it can ruin our lives but addicting to much of social media ruins our lives being worse.
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