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As society develops, many issues arise regarding our lives have raised and raise heated debate among people. One such issue is that meal has become easier to cook. This develop has enhanced the way people life. People from different walks of life may take different stances on this issue. Personally, I agree with the given statement. There are several reasons that could validate my position, but in this essay, I will introduce two of them as follows. To begin with, there are numerous reasons why food has dish become convenient to make. This variety has make a better the way of people live. (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) However, the most notable one which stems from fact is that as the food has become portably to prepare these day. We can eat food quickly in busy life such as when people go to work or when student go to school in early morning. According to a survey conducted by MBC, one of the Korean public broadcasting stations, more than 66 percent surveyed people responded that as meal has become easier to cook today, people can eat meal quickly in early morning such as when people go to office. So, people don’t have to spend time for breakfast a lot in busy life. The responders said that all these activities greatly contributed to improving the quality of life, though the type of activities varied across different age and gender groups. This clearly indicates that as food has become convenient to prepare, our life has become better. A few weeks ago, I happened to read a tweet on twitter regarding my view. A significant number of people replied that because of this development, we can eat food more easy in busy time. For example, when people go to work and when students go to school in early morning. Even more surprising to me was interest they showed in this issue. The tweet was heavily retweeted and many twitterians formed a bond of sympathy. This clearly indicates that as meal has become simply to make, out daily life has become convenient than past. All in all, because of the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe that as food has become easy to prepare, people's life has become better.
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