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As society develops, many issue arise regarding our lives and raise heated debate among people. One such issue is that many adults let their child look after a dog or cat and the other pet on them self. People can different walks of life may take different stances on this essay. My view is that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. There are several reasons that could validate my position, but in this essay, I will introduce two of them as follows. To begin with, there are numerous reasons why parents letting their children take care of a pet on thire own is not good. However, the most notable one which stems from the fact is that a majority of children don’t have idea about how care for animal and some children treat their pet like atoy thiers pet such as toy. Therefore, pets can fell stressed out because of childrens. According to a survey conducted by MBC, one of the Korean public broadcasting stations, more than 66 percent of surveyed people responded that a lot of kids don’t know about how cope or how take care of animals. That is why pets can stress out because of kids. As well as, pet or child can occurs accident. The responders said that all these activities contributed to improving the quality of life, though the type of activities varied across different age and gender groups. This clearly indicates that parents letting their children look after a pet by themselves they self has a lot of disadvantages. A few weeks ago, I happened to read a tweet on twitter regarding my view. A significant number of people replied that many childrens have no idea that how take care of pet. So, this condition can become an accident. Additionally, pet can stress out because of children. (앞에서 했던 말입니다.) Even more surprising to me was the interest they showed in this issue. The tweet was heavily retweeted and many twitterians formed a bond of sympathy. This clearly indicates that many parents leave their children look after a pet on their own is not good for child and pet.
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