■ Direction· Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
· Task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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Your Answer ▼
The diagram illustrates how plastic bottles are recycled from trash to new product.
Overall, the recycling process has cyclical 9 stages from plastic bottle as a trash to some new products like plastic bottle, plastic case, pencil, recyling bag and even t-shirt.
First of all, plastic bottles are collected in recycling box. Next, they are moved to recycling center by special recycling trucks. In recycling center, they are sorted by whether they can be recycled.
Only bottles which are sorted to recyclable group are compressed into blocks. Following this, the blocks go through crusing crushing stage, breaking broken down into small plastic pieces. After washing the fine pieces, they go into a machine producing and come out as plastic pallets.
Subsequently, the pallets are heated to form raw material and the raw material revives are revived into new products including plastic bottles, recycling bag, pencil or t-shirt. Furthermore, the recycling recycled plastic bottles can be recycled. Thus the process for recycling plastic bottles is cyclical. |
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채점 기준 | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Total |
Score (9점 만점) | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 |
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전반적으로 하나의 과정을 상세하게 잘 묘사해주셨지만 수동태의 사용에 있어 어색한 점이 많이 보이고 있습니다. 인간의 행동이 아니라 사물의 변화를 나타낼 경우 자가 의지가 없기 때문에 능동태가 아니라 수동태를 사용해주시는 것이 보다 적절합니다. 수고하셨습니다.