■ Direction· Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
· Task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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Some educational experts say that children have to do homework. However, others say that homework does more harm than good. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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It is commonly considered that doing homework is essential for children because homework helps to organize what children learn. However, I strongly believe that homework brings more detrimental effects than its benefits as it is somewhat compulsory. I will further outline my argument with both views of doing homework. On the one hand, one of the benefits of assignments is to have educatees review and practice what they learn. There is a limitation of accepting and understanding contents from only having classes. As a result, students are required to spend some time on comprehending information of subjects, and some educational experts claim that homework works for it. For example, according to some research, it has been observed that students who review the curriculum by executing homework remember more information compared to other students who do not. It shows that having assignments has an influence on enhancing students' academic performances since students who do assignments have more knowledge relatively. On the other hand, other educational experts believe that considering the negative effects of homework, homework is not worth it. Tasks from a school or an institute feel mandatory to pupils, which may be burdensome to them. They also feel pressured that they have to finish tasks within a deadline, and it can affect that they eventually lose interest in studying. For instance, based on studies conducted by the Korean Ministry of Education, the participants who are encouraged by tasks to study are caused had more stress than the other participants who are did not, and it ends up increasing possibilities of losing interest in what they study. In this regard, it is obvious that having homework is connected for children to being tired of studies. In conclusion, homework might be beneficial to educatees because it helps them look through contents they learn. However, it can lead educatees to the point where they avoid learning due to the pressure of homework. Therefore, I argue that the advantages of assignments do not outweigh the disadvantages. |
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채점 기준 | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Total |
Score (9점 만점) | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 |
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과제에 대한 장단점을 모두 다루면서도 글쓴이의 의견을 논리적으로 언급해주신 좋은 글 써 주셨습니다. 객관적인 수치를 들어 근거를 뒷받침해주신 점도 좋지만 글쓴이의 의견을 좀 더 설득력 있게 제시하기 위해서는 아이들이 어울려 놀 수 있는 시간이 적어진다든가 등의 또 다른 관점을 제시해주시는 것도 좋습니다. 수고하셨습니다.