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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET
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Nowadays, people prefer to eat fast foods rather than well-prepared dishes because life is busy and those kinds of food can save time. It's easy and comfortable to consume. I agree with that opinion but there are plenty of side-effects of First, I would like to talk about how fast food can affect badly to each person. If we consume that food frequently, that makes us Second, Fast food makes our society unhealthy and triggers some problems. The purpose of eating convenience food is to save time, so most people eat those alone. Eating a proper meal with other people is important to make people relax and be calm. Those feelings are crucial to living in this tough modern society. When we consume dishes with family or friends, we In conclusion, I understand why people try to ingest junk food these days. However, we should get a healthy meal for protecting our health and make our society alive. | ||||
채점 기준 | TR | CC | LR | GRA and Accuracy) | Total |
Score | 6 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 5.5 |
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Comment | 주어진 제시문의 의도를 정확히 이해하고 이에 성실히 답변해주신 글 작성해주셨습니다. 그렇지만 문법적으로 어색한 부분들에 유의해 주시기 바랍니다. 수고하셨습니다. |