The given bar graph gives information about how often Americans had in junk food stores in the
three years, 2003, 2006 and 2013.
On the
whole, it is clear that people who live in America usually ate out the restaurants
sold fast food once a week and once a twice in the period shown.
Looking at
the bar more closely, around 30 per cent of Americans ate fast food once a
week, especially in 2006, its figure peaks at the highest point at 33%. Likewise,
there are similar figures that they consumed in junk food restaurants once or twice a month, from 25 per cent in 2006 to 33 per cent in 2013. Meanwhile, less
than 5% of people who live in the USA always ate in fast-food restaurants
or never had there between 2003 and 2013.
When it comes
to people ate junk food in America a few time a year, it showed the same
figure, at 30% in the two different years, 2006 and 2013. Also, the percentage
of American ate in fast food restaurant was 15 to 20 % in the given period.
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그리고 6가지 다 언급하려니 시간이 많이 걸리는데 몇가지는 빼도 되나요?
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