Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. |
Some people think students have to know that human or nations how how human beings or nations have lived until now. Other people believe that studying science and technology is more practical and could make development easily and quickly in modern society.
Students should know how their ancestors or older people made faults in the past that ancients or older people how to make fault in the past so that they cannot to repeat the same faults in the future. The vast events of past direct people to better ways. If history is forsaken, people would get lost. The direction is more important than speed or methods.
However, science Science and technology is necessary in our lives. People could not live without science and technology now. The development of science and technology is getting faster. That is why schools have to consider this subject as is the most important and students have to learn that. When cultures and civilisation advance, the methods and tools are priorities.
There are many arguments as to which subject is more essential between history and science and technology. I think history can direct the way and science and technology can make methods. When people are going somewhere, both are is needed so these cannot be split splited.
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