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My answer.
The diagram below illustrates the destination of Anthropology graduates who finished their undergraduate course, and the table explains about Anthropology graduates' salaries after they work for five years.
In general, more than half of Anthropology graduates do a full-time work after they did their undergraduate course. In addition, after work for five years, the graduates from studying Anthropology course earn at least $25,000 and plenty of people are paid more than $50,000.
First of all, more than half of students who studied the Anthropology major from one university get a full-time work. The proportion of part-time work and unemployed are the second highest and the third highest which account for 15% and 12% respectively. Moreover, percentages of both students who don't know their destination and do a full-time postgraduate study are same as 8%.
Secondly, after work for five years, graduates who study Anthropology course earn at least $25,000 and some of them earn more than $100,000. Most graduates who are freelance consultants are normally paid more than $75,000. Also, graduates who work in the government sector have high salaries, 80% of graduate who are employed in government sector earn at least $75,000.