It is a common belief that it is not necessary to be interested in world events, even if they are unlikely to directly effect on our lives. However, I firmly believe that people should have knowledge of international events. This is because knowledge of events in other countries allow nations to support other countries and even know how to deal with problems that their society will solve.
To begin with, being interested in overseas events is able to help other citizens of the world. Society crises, natural disasters and conflicts unfortunately frequent occur in many places around the world. By paying attention to these events, people can share resources that assist other citizens when they need them. For example, in 2008, there were serious damage to earthquake in Sichuan China. However, many countries reacted to their natural disaster events, and then international communities helped them to save people faster than if Chinese people were working alone. Also many international countries donated large amounts of money to repairs their society.
On top of that, being aware of international events leads to better understanding of how to deal with problems in our society. Because many societies face similar problems, it is better solutions that learning other countries how other status succeed and fail can provide people with guideline. For example, In Korea, the number of migrant workers have increased for several year. Some of them suffered from poor treatment, while other remained in the country without visa. After looking at international example from the UK and Germany, which have experienced a similar problem in the past, the Korean government was able to introduce laws to protect their rights and to reduce the number who are illegal immigrants.
To sum up, understanding what is occurring around the world is able to help other people and to provide useful information that can be used to solve problems in our society. For these reasons, it is important to maintain an interested in events occurring in the world.
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