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Task 1 첨삭 부탁드려요
목표는 7점이고 12월 중으로 시험을 보려고 합니다.
시간은 16분 걸렸고, 176자 입니다.
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Dear, SJ.
Hi, it was nice to meet you last week. I believe that we spent great time together. I was looking forward to meeting you because we had not seen each other for 3 years. I realized you immedieately when I saw you in the Airport as you did not changed a lot.
I planned a lot of things to do with you in this city. Visiting Waterfront Park together was a highlight of your visit. This place is a landmark of this city and my favourite place to visit. I am going to send to your email pictures we took together here.
However, I want to invite you visit this place next summer with our anouther best friend, JW.I assume that she would love to visit this place and I had not seen her 3 years likewise. I will bring you guys to other awesome places such as Stanley Park and Queen Elizabeth Park. I cannot wait till we meet again all together.
I hope to see you guys soon.
Sincerely,
Ian Jeong.