해커스 아이엘츠 라이팅 교재 96쪽입니다.
답안:
The pie charts show why British people visited art museums during the two-year period. (구체적인 연도를 적어주시면 좋습니다.)
Overall, most (여기와 관련해서는 정말 많은 수험생들이 틀리는데, 이에 대해서는 총평에서 링크를 넣어드리겠습니다.) people visited art museums to learn and gain knowledge both in 1990 and 2000 but the reason which least people answered has changed from 'buying art' to 'others'. The proportion of most categories slightly changed.
Looking at the charts more closely, the percentage of 'to learn and gain knowledge' category remained relatively stable from 44% to 45% in 1990 and 2000 respectively. In 1990, the same proportion of people answered they visited art museums to attend a special exhibit and to spend time with friends and family, but the proportions of two categories increased to 18 percent and 17 percent each. 27% of people said the reason for visiting art mesums is to fill their tavel schedules, which was the second largest category in 1990. However, this percentage dropped to 12% in 2000. Only 1% of people went to art museums to buy art in 1990, but the situation has changed in 2000, with the rise to 5 percent. The proportion of other reasons was similar as 4% and 3% each in 1990 and 2000.
감사합니다!!!!
비밀번호는 1234 입니다.
총평: (6/7/7/7) 7.0
이정도면, 시간 내에 제출되었을 경우 충분히 괜찮은 글로 평가받을 겁니다. 패러프레이징도 깔끔하게 잘 된 편이며, 문법이나 어휘 쪽 오류도 거의 없었네요.
most관련해서만 조금 주의해주시면 될 것 같습니다. 이에 대해서는 밑의 링크를 참고해주세요!
수고하셨습니다 :)
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