One of the controversial issues today result in how to deal with bad situations. It is often assert that just adapting the bad incidence like working in an unsatisfied place or earning not enough money is the best way to overcome, while others insist that making changes to improve those cases are the right way. In my opinion, I would like to say that the latter view is more advantageous.
There are people who think that accepting bad situations are the best way and there are no denying that adapting into the situation makes lower stress and make people avoid to be negative. To be specific, if we not accept our situation, it would make us more exhausting and also lack of enthusiasm at work. Moreover, taking a risk in a bad situation takes us one step closer to the our succeed. For example, almost every person who tend to be an amazing person like Edison accepted their bad situations and that made them to success.
On the other hand, there can be an opposing case, making changes are the best way for the bad situations. While improving the situation we can be also developed and enhance ourselves. By that I mean, there are no other things that is stronger than making an effort and there is no doubt that it leads to success. Furthermore, to be success, experiencing is a crucial part. Improving the situation wil help to solve out other risks which they might come across in the future.
In conclusion, there are lots of merits of accepting the worst circumstances, however, on my personal note, changing the situation has more advantageous for the future.
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