Some people think that universities sould assign audents to share dormitory rooms. Other think that students should be able to choose their roommate on their own.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is common belief that university students should be assigned their dormitory roommate for their diverse
diversityexperience. However, there is a more persuasive argument that students should be able to choose their roommate on their own for their stable school life.
On the one hand, some people think that the role of friends is very important to have a lot of experiences so university students have to make
havemany friends and relationships without any limitation. People tend to make relationships with whom they are already familiyer with. So (문장을 and but so로 시작하는 것은 좋지 못합니다.), if their roommate isdoesnot assigned by university, they would loose their opportunities to make a new relationship. Actually, if someone makes a lot of friends from a variety of nation, it would be helpful to learn cultural diversity. As many people knowknown ,inthesethis global world, to get a job in the global company or to create sucessful business, students have to build an ability to understand what they have not been went through.
Nevertheless,
in a regards ofdue to the fact that dormitory is a kind of home where a student who far from their family can relex their body and mental, I support the idea that they should be able to choice their roommate on their own. Besides, universities students doingtremendous activities outside of dormitory and most of them are underthestress already because of many assignments and academical progress. If they have to maintain a formal attitude even in their very private space, it is impossible to keep going study until they graduated. Recent studies have shown that a comfortable circumstance makes more energy to boost up when people have to completemaketheir goalcomplete.
To sum up, while it is apparent that roommate in university dormitory (대학 측에서 골라줄 때~라고 정확하게 서술해주셔야 합니다.) has many positive effects for students to builidind global mindset
. It, it is undeniable that students should have the righta rightto choosechoicetheir roommate.
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