Topic
Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled.
They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
In modern society, to improve the eco-system
of the Earth, some insist there should be more laws and ways on recyclable waste
by governments. I cannot deny governments need to focus on making recycling a legal requirement,
but public people should address that matter on that in their lives as well.
Firstly, there are a couple of reasons why
governments should make laws of recycling rubbish. The first reason is that it
is too difficult to naturally let people reuse rubbish by themselves. This is
because without any force and notice, public might prefer to be convenient (이거 학생들이 많이 틀리니까 주의해주세요!) convenience in
routine. For example, when having parties for dinner or birthday, they use to consume
disposal plates, forks, or even cups. Then, used those these could be just dumped, without having to wash them no
need to wash. Also, another reason is that some of them probably do does not know using
disposal can occur to contaminate the environment. For making them know To make them be aware of this, governments should give them fine regarding how many disposals are used or tax on the price of the
products.
Secondly, for increasing However, to increase the amount of
recycling waste, individuals should make efforts themselves. Individuals potentially
have effects on each other, which means they can encourage other people around them
to remind why they should reduce the number of waste that could be reused and
how used products could be made for different purpose. That could be more
effective than fines and regulations.
In conclusion, not only governments but
also individuals should focus on reducing the unrecycled waste. All of them
need to cooperate for themselves and their future generation.
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