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Since human beings have been living in an overwhelming flood of information, it became possible for young people to have various measures for resource acquisition. Due to this phenomenon, the teachers' role has dwindled as a facilitator of learning. However, I cannot entirely agree with this assumption, and this essay will explain why the teachers' role is pivotal in education. The primary reason we have to take into consideration is that students will be able to build better academic success when teachers are around them. When students have positive relationships with their teachers, teachers will be able to individualize instructions or curriculum for each student, which will make it possible for pupils to improve their academic performances under the most tailored way of tutelage. On top of that, it will be difficult for young students to figure out whether the information they have found is correct or not. Having teachers around them in person as a person who can confirm the degree of accuracy in materials or the value of the information would help young people who are still in the middle of the learning process. Besides, as an adult, teachers can advise on the difficult things that young people face in their growth. When juveniles go through puberty, they often feel lost or deviate from their study or school life. To prevent these problems that can happen to any student in their tough ages, teachers can act as a helper to light the way young people like a lighthouse and not go astray. Furthermore, by forming a strong relationship between teachers and students, pupils can feel more satisfied with their school life. According to a survey, adolescents picked 'teacher who pays attention to students' as their best teacher and also answered that they get higher grades on the subjects taught by their favorite teacher. These data show not only the importance of good relationships between educators and students but also their effectiveness.
In light of the above factors, it can be said (혹은 취향껏 다른 표현) teachers can take the imperative role as one of the mediums that provide information to students and a mentor who can lead them to a better future.
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