There might be contentious debated regarding the issue of whether owning a house is more important than renting a house for residents. I agree with the view that buying a own house is good to people. This essay will first discuss the drawbacks of buying a house, and then look at the benefit of owning it.
Many people feel that preference of owning a house have some negative influence. Firstly, it could be bring about the increase of costs of houses, in this reason, many people who want to buy a apartment or a studio, such as couples who get married, can be suffer from this phenomenon. A recent survey by Korea University shows that the cost of apartments rises 60 percent over than 2 years before.
In spite of the drawbacks mentioned above, I think that owning a house can be seen very important to people. In general, home makes people feel comfy and cozy. It is very important for people because during the worktime they might have a tough and hard time. After that, when people come back their home, they might want to get some good feeling throughout their family or own furnitures in house. However, if the house is not theirs, but rental house, aforementioned good things might have been reduced. To give more detail, The Chosun Herald also reported that the importance of feeling from their home. Pondering on aforementioned statements, it is more reasonable to take the my view as the established opinion.
To make it conclusion, although a tendency of owning a house could come about some disadvantages, but I think that an own house give more benefits to people whom live in.
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