The graph below shows the employment rate of each gender in four different countries in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrate the percentage of employment of each gender in South Africa, Chile, Finland, and Norway for the year 2002.
Overall, it is clear that the proportion of male's employment was higher than that of female's employment in the 2002. While South Africa and Chile showed significant disparity of employment rate between male and female employees, Finland and Norway had slight difference between male and female workers.
Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that the employment percentage of female and male employees in Norway was significantly higher than other three countries with 75 percent and just under 80 percent, respectively. In contrast, South Afirca has the lowest share of employment rate. In the case of Finland, it had the similar proportion of employment rate between male (69 percent) and female (65 percent) employees. Lastly, Chile had 70 percent of male workers which doubled 35 percent of female workers. Among four countries, it had the most outstanding gap between female and male employment rate in 2002.
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첫 문단 첫 문장 복수랑 두번째 문단 in all countries 빼먹은거 비롯해서 실수가 많아요 ㅠㅠ
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