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In many developed countries, an increasing number of people are choosing to live alone, and this change forms new types of cultures. It is widely believed that there is not only one reason that makes it a societal problem, but in this essay, I will discuss a main reason and the point why I still think that it is a positive trend.
Specially, today’s modern society somewhat forces people to grow fast and not to focus much on their own selves for introspection, so they live their life without having time for themselves. As a result, most young people deny to live with other family members and leave home before it is too late to get back their right to pursue their own life and really become adults.
Oftentimes, to live alone can give people many advantages. Actually, most adults nowadays do not even have a decent hobby to enjoy for the rest of the life because they spend their twenties doing only study or work. However, by spending time alone, they might be able to develop their favorite hobbies to know more about themselves to live happier in their later life. (이 문장의 앞에 있는, 즉 빨간색 표시되지 않은 부분은 사실 덜 중요합니다. 이 빨간색으로 이어지기 위한 전야제에 불과하므로, 빨간 부분에 보다 집중해주세요!)
Collectedly, many people in a busy society tend to choose to live on their own. They do so because they can be freed from the expectations from others and the society and become more attentive in life as adults. |