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These days, many countries have single-sex
schools and co-educational schools. Many parents have concern about choosing the right school for their children.
I strongly believe that single-sex schools are better than co-educational
schools.
Some people argue that co-educational
schools have the most advantages to their children. This is because Because they can undergo variety
things. For example, boys and girls are so different. We would experience various
clubs. (앞 문장과 전혀 매끄럽게 이어지지 않는 상황입니다.) The co-educational schools would have many clubs that boys like or girls
like. This case is good to children, moreover, we can understand about boys. Teenagers do not know well about the other gender don’t know other sexes. If they live together in school, they will know and
understand different sexes. (참고로 이 문단은 제가 문법을 건드리느라고 고치긴 했지만, 내용 자체가 single-sex school을 강조하는 방향으로 싹 바뀌어야 하는 상황입니다. 밑에서 자세히 말씀드리겠습니다.)
On the other hand, some people persist that
single-sex schools have more advantages will affect the children good experience. Because single-sex
schools can make are made children more comfortable. In addition, they can study more
intensively. In my experience, I graduated from a girls high school. I studied hard.
However, my friend who graduated co-educational schools didn’t study hard. Because,
she had a boyfriend, she couldn’t (줄임말은 풀어써주셔야 합니다.) study hard. In Korea, high school students important
to study. Single-sex schools can make good grades. It will be good to student’s
future. Furthermore, they can make real friends. In my cases, I was had great memory
of school life. It will give children good impact.
Many parents have this concern. In my
opinion, single-sex schools have many more advantages more than co-educational
schools.
항상 감사합니다!!!
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