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It is a common belief that owning a home is
better than renting one in some countries. There are several different views
about this issue, but I personally believe that owning a house is a positive
situation.
The reason why people want to have their
own home is that it is considered as a criterion for a stable life. From the ancient days, people have built their own house to protect their family and possession.
By having a secured place for their own, it makes them feel comfortable and
relaxed. Also owning a house is considered as a successful life in many
societies. People try to buy a bigger and fancier house so that they can have
self-pride.
Owning a house has many good aspects.
First, people can be emotionally stable by owning a house. If a person is
living in a renting home, they consistently worry about lease contraction because
they don’t (줄임말은 풀어써주셔야 합니다.) know when will their landlord break the contract. <------문단 내에서 여기까지의 내용은 수정을 해주시는 게 좋은데, 이에 대해서는 밑에서 자세히 말씀드리겠습니다.) In addition, owning
a home could give a positive reaction to economy. According to recent research in
Korea, the main reason why people make money is to purchase their own house. More
and more people are trying to have a better job to get higher salary. It leads
to a boost in the economy.
In conclusion, owning a home is a
contentious topic because there are opinions that support and oppose this basic
idea. However, I personally believe that owning a home is positive situation
because by doing so, people can be emotionally stable and it can also boost our
economy.
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