<Topic> The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | |||
The chart illustrates the proportion of Australian doing regular exercise in six different age groups concerning male and female in 2010. To begin with, the most interesting feature is that percentage over 50 were mostly in women aged between 35 and 64. On the other hand, male teenager who work out regularly showed 52.8% in 2010. It is also interesting that the average percentage number fluctuated between 40 to 50 percent in almost all aged groups. There were also some gap differences between these ages. The biggest gap between male and female was age between 35 to 44 and the second biggest gap was age 45 to 54, which were following generations. Meanwhile, age over 65 male and female showed the approximately same figures, which men were 46.7% and women were 47.1%. Lastly, male were more likely to do regular physical activity than female did in age between 15 to 24. In conclusion, men tend to exercise more regularly than women at their early age; however, after 25 years old, women did more physcial activity in their later life. | |||
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