The first chart compares the number
of UK tourists to the US and US tourists to the UK and the second chart shows the
amount spent by those visitors between 2011 and 2015.
Overall, it is clear that more British
people visited the US and spent more money there than vice versa. The visitor
number of both groups has increased since 2013 and the amount of money they used
also saw an upward trend during this 5-year period.
According to the first chart, in
2011, above 3 millions of British people went to the US while there are only around
2.5 millions of visitors to the UK from the US. In the following year, the gap between
two groups narrowed in 2012 with a significant fall in the number of UK visitors.
However, the gap widened again in 2013 since the number of Americans who visited the UK decreased quickly. Both figures grew has grown continually since 2013 and UK visitors
to the US has reached to 3.5 by end of the period in question.
In the second chart, it is
apparent that the amount of money that British tourists spent has expanded over
the whole given period. Particularly, it shot up significantly from 2013,
reaching nearly 6 billions USD by 2015. Meanwhile, although the amount of money
that UK earned from US visitors also has grown constantly, the gap between it
and US’s profits from UK tourists has widened.
[231자/35분(분석: 6분, 글 작성: 29분)/6.5/10월 말 시험]
million이랑 billion 저렇게 써도 괜찮나요 아니면 숫자로 바꾸어서 써주어야 하나요?
제가 질문을 정확히 이해하지는 못했는데, 만약에 숫자로 바꾼다는 게 1,000,000을 의미하는 거면, 그냥 1 million으로 가시면 됩니다 :)
항상 감사합니다 :)
총평: (7/6/7/6) 6.5
스티치님도 이제 슬슬 시간 신경쓰셔야 합니다. 이전까지는 시험까지 꽤 시간이 있어서 제가 따로 터치를 안 했지만, 이제는 이번달 시험이니까 꼭 20분/40분에 각각 맞춰주세요! 지금 글도 시간 때문에 절대 6.5는 안 나옵니다.
수고하셨습니다 :)