The bar chart shows the total minutes of
telephone calls of local, national and international and mobiles calls from 1995
to 2002 in the UK.
It is obvious that the order of list had
not changed throughout the whole years in the chart which the most minutes of
calls were made through local lines, is local, national and international had maintained the second highest position. Even
though there was a significant increase to mobile calls minuets, it was located
at the last.
Looking at the chart more closely, the
minutes of local calls gradually increased from 1995 to 1999. However, from
2000, it got started to decrease to 2002. While local calls experienced a fluctuation, the figure of national and international calls and mobiles sustainably went up
every year. Particularly, mobiles calls dramatically rose in number raised by 30 billion minutes from
1999 to 2001. In 2001, the combined figure of national and international and mobiles calls
surpassed local calls. In the last year in that chart, there were not enormous
differences between call types, compared to the past than before.
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