The diagram describes the way of collecting rainwater
to use it as a source of drinking water in an Australian town. Overall, rainwater can be
reusable as to drink water through the cleaning process. Also, the process of producing
drinking water is quite simple because it is made of the rainwater itself and
did not require any other complicated (이거 의외로 학생들이 많이 틀리니까 주의해주세요! rainv님 실력이면 맞출 수 있어야 합니다.) methods.
As clearly seen from the chart, the first step of
process starts would be starting from rainy days. When the rain goes down to the
ground, the sooner rainwater has collected by the drain. After that, the
collected rainwater is delivered to the water filter to reduce the garbage in the water
and is moved to the storage. The water is moved to another facility from storage for
the next process called water treatment, by using chemicals to sanitize the
water to become drinking water. Finally, the cleaned water is able to be produced
for individual household as a drinking purpose.(151words)
총평: (7/7/6/6/) 6.5
다행히도 바로 전의 Task1보다는 훨씬 나았습니다. 그러나 아직 제가 rainv님께 기대하는 정도, 그리고 task2를 잘 써주시는 정도에 비해서는 부족하니까 더 연습해주셔야 해요. task1:2의 비율을 7:3 정도로 놓고 공부해주시면 됩니다.
수고하셨습니다 :)