Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Since the dawn of time a variety of living creatures have been dying out. Moreover, life satisfaction of individuals has also been decreasing. Some believe that we should make an effort to keep the diversity of animals' breeds, however others assert that we should put our society and humans first more than other factors. In this essay, I will provide some information on each viewpoints and offer my perspective in this matter.
On the one hand, there are several valid opinions explaining why we should protect endangered animals. First and foremost, animals can be a method of education for people. To be specific, children visit zoos to learn and experience unusual creatures that are not prevalent to observe in our day to day lives. By that I mean, if unique animals are not existing any further, youngsters will not be able to connect with wild living things in the future as their previous generations are used to. Moreover, if the authorities do not give attention to animals in danger, it will accelerate environmental problems since all the creatures including human beings, plants and animals are strongly associated with animals. Thus, animal right activists have been complaining to care about them for humans' well-being.
On the other hand, there are several reasons to focus on humans’ problems. Initially, A lot of unfavorable things are consistently happening which we should take to tackle such as racism, ageism and new diseases. the general public insist that the governments should put human related issues first, despite we make use of other breathing creatures as long as it supports to find possible measures for human beings. Besides this, as our satisfaction of life improves, we are capable of offering better natural habitat for other living things at the same time.
To sum up, we should take account into extinct animals because it is related to the ecosystem and also hugely affects our healthy lives. however the priority should be humans’ welfare since we tend to use animals for our benefits. It is my opinion that, rather than only focusing on things happening our society, it would be advantageous to concern about other creatures for us.
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