in some countries, the rate of criminal acts being committed by teenagers is increasing. what do you think are the causes of this, and what measures could be taken solve them?
In recent years, the rate of criminal acts being committed by teenagers is increasing. In this regard, I think it would be meaningful to discuss why such a problem has been created and how this problem can be mitigated as show below. There are several some cause of this situation. The main reason is that punishment of teenager’s criminal is too weak.
Weakness of punishment about teenagers criminal make lose awareness of crime to teenagers. For example, if they are not punished although they commit a serious crime. They will not reflect on oneself related their crime. In addition, if they do not awareness seriousness of crime. They commit more serious crime then teenager When they become adult.
Nevertheless, I thinks that government should prevent increase of teenagers crime. Firstly, government should strengthen punishment of teenager’s crime. For instance, we have to make teenagers aware of committing a serious crime bringing in a heavy punishment. Also, teenagers need a mental counseling for awareness related criminal seriousness. For example, we will give opportunity to teenagers who commit crime. So that they can receive metal counseling. This things makes them aware about serious crime. Also it can prevent to commit more serious crime when they become adult.
In conclusion, although crime of teenagers has been increased we can resolve the problem used various way.
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