Some people think that the best way to learn about business is to study a course at college or university. Others believe that there are other better ways to learn about business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Most universities have a business department or MBA. They provide theoretical class which students have
to know and utilize at work company. On the other hand, many students prefer to work
as an intern during vacation and many companies also want to employ those who have experience in the field been
worked in the field. It means that just studying theory at school is not enough
to learn about business. This essay will discuss my personal opinion in detail after providing both
views.
First of all, many people who join business departments at university get a job related to business. They can learn professional terms or various theories at school. Also, they can try to apply their knowledge which they studied in the class to projects. This experience will be helpful when they get a job and work at company. In this case, they will think that studying at university is the best way to learn about business.
However, some people think
that just studying at university is not enough to learn about business. What
they learn at school is just theory and it is not useful in the real field. Even
though students study business at college university, they have to learn newly after they get employed joining to company. The reason for this is because Because the business field is so various that students cannot
learn everything. Therefore, many schools require intern experience as a graduation
requirement. Thus, it is better to learn business in the real field, working as an intern or doing their own business.
In conclusion, there are many ways to learn
business but I think that experience experiencing in the field where people want to work
in the future is better way than just studying through books to learn more
efficient things.
overall : 7.0
총평: (7/7/6/7) 7.0
이정도 자잘한 오류들은 괜찮습니다. 물론 없으면 더 좋지만요. 개인적인 욕심으로는 본론이 조금만 더 풍부했으면 (특히 본론1) 좋았겠지만, 여하튼 7.0, 아무리 못해도 6.5는 충분히 받을 수 있는 글이에요.
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