Q. The diagram below shows the number of
landline telephones per 1000 people in different countries over a five-year
period.
Write a report for a university lecturer
describing the information shown below.
The bar chart illustrates how many
individuals per 1000 had landline telephones in nine nations in three separate
years (2000, 2002, and 2004).
Overall, one can see that a significant
majority of ownership in these years was seen in Singapore, followed by the second-highest which was Brunei Darussalam. Generally speaking, the five countries (Cambodia, Indonesia,
Lao PDR, Myanmar, and Vietnam) had lower number of landline telephones than others.
As for Singapore during this period, over
450 per 1000 people had landline phones from 2000 to 2002 and around 430 per
1000 people had them in 2004. At the same time, around (행복하자님의 경우 이 단어를 너무 좋아하시는데, 가끔은 바꿔서 써주세요!) 230 to 250 per 1000
people had them in Brunei Darussalam, which was almost half of the figures Singapore’s
citizens had.
In the four countries, Cambodia,
Indonesia, Lao PDR, Myanmar, and Vietnam, the number of landlines were lower
than 50 per 1000 people, which were two times lower than Philippines and Singapore
but nine times lower (여기만 세 번 쓰였습니다.) than Singapore throughout the periods.
총평: (7/7/6/7) 7.0
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