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It is common belief that the best way to succeed is having own single skill for life. Someone might agree, however, I support to the idea that to develop various skill is to bring in the better future life.
Of course we can not discount fact that to concentrate only one skill to make people as professional in their field. To explain, the people who find what they want to be from when they are younger; They would have many time to build their skills and get a head a start than others who do not. For example, if they build their careers only one skill in their sector they can get higher salary due to they are the people who are recognized in their sphere
However, the fact still remain that to focus only one skill is to make some risks in their future life. To be specific, some people might get tired of their job easily then they will look for again that which job is more appropriate to them. Therefore, most young people try to work various work places because they want to work which is suit for their aptitude. In addition, people can have a lot of opportunities if they are versatile.
In conclusion, it is true a certain extent that developing only one skill is to make them as professional, however I still believe that to have several skill could lead to get more benefit to people.
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