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The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of water utilized by five sectors in Sydney, Australia between 1997 and 2007.
Overall, it is clear that food industry accounted for the biggest percentage and building industry made up the smallest rate in the both years. In addition, a decrease was seen in food industry, manufacturing, and building industry, whereas there was a increase in household use and service industry over the period from 1997 to 2007.
A more detailed look at the pie charts revealed that in the case of 1997, food industry made up 48%, followed by household use with approximately 20% of the total. The remaining sectors (manufacturing, service industry, and building) took up about 30% of water use and they were 15%, 13%, and 5%, respectively.
According to the pie chart in 2007, food industry was the category with by far the largest proportion of total water use, even if this sector witnessed a plunge from 48% to 41%. Service industry consisted of 25% and household made up 21%, which experienced a surge at 12% points and 2% points (1% point말고는 싹 다 s가 붙는다고 보시면 됩니다.). The remaining categories (manufacturing and building industry) witnessed a slight slightly recede from 1997 to 2007 at 4% and 3%, respectively.
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