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Modern society has
been developed in various ways. In each field, there is always competition and
someone is superior while others are a minority. This is because people’s
abilities are all different respectively and they try to take high rank through the
competition in each field. I believe that competitiveness has is positive effects
on individuals and I will examine for reasons below.
To begin with,
there always has been competition in our society. Even children, they should
compete with other friends for academic subjects or sports and so on. They would
get scores and grades through the competition and always be compared to other
students. In addition, according to their grades, most of the students are divided in their
rank and enter a university that suits themselves for individuals. Sometimes it is brutal, however,
competitiveness is inevitable because it gives power for that people try to harder.
Competitiveness is a positive
trend because it makes people to be motivated. Individuals should know competitors’
ability and average scores of the field so that they can figure out what rank
they are in. If people notice their rank, they will try harder to take a high level.
Moreover, we could have better items. For example, Samsung which is a large
company in Korea always compete with to LG because the public compare to those
companies. Therefore, they make an effort more to take an upper position compared to their counterpart than
others. So the public can use better devices which is positive for our society. (이 논제는 기본적으로 '개인'에 초점이 가야하기 때문에, 기업 간 경쟁에 대해 다루는 것은 100% 적절하다고 볼 수는 없습니다. 아예 오프토픽은 당연히 아니지만요.)
In conclusion,
competitiveness brings positive effect on society because through the
competition people and companies produce advanced products and results. Competition
is necessary to flourish for people.
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