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In modern society, computer games have been considered a major sports around the world. The parents assume that it has less important in terms of learning and guess it will have a harmful effect on teenagers. I partly agree with this perspective. To begin with, while the technology and game market is growing, there are also many negative aspects of games. The games that students face are suggestive and violent, and in addition, many bad words are used in the game such as Battle Ground, GTA. They are exposed the games easily in a huge game market and they can’t filter the game out. In fact, research results showed that people who were exposed to violent games or videos were noticeably more aggressive in reality. Therefore, the games cannot have educational effect and It can harm children’s emotional development. Especially for adolescents. On the other hand, not all the games that children encounter are violent. By playing appropriate games, they can get rid of stress from their studies most easily and simply and It can be function of entertainment for them. Furthermore, playing computer game can lead to developing interest to in game developer and computer-related fields. Due to doing this, It may also possible to find talented people that will lead to the development of IT industry in the future. Depending on how they use it, it can be an advantage or a disadvantage. Computer games may offer a limited range of intellectual benefits but they also cause lack of physical activities and mental development. In my opinion, they control themselves for their studies or parents have to limit their children.
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