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Dear Sam,
I am so glad that you will visit my country
for holidays. As you have asked me the advice for your holiday, I have found
some useful information from the internet.
Firstly, it would be great if you can find an
accommodation in Seoul because this city offers various activities. <(offer to find somewhere to stay이기 때문에 서울에 머물면 좋을 것 같아요 보다는 지낼 곳을 찻아준다거다 마련해주시겠다고 하셔야합니다) Mainly,
Seoul is well known for shopping and clubbing which is good for you as you
love them more than yourself.
Secondly, as I mentioned above, Seoul is a great place for shopping. That is why, you should visit the place, which called
Dongdae-Moon. They are open 24 hours for shoppers and variety of food is waiting for you.n and they are even they are extremely cheap. This is the reason why you
should visit Dongdae-Moon. However, few vendors are always trying to rip people
off with their overpriced goods. So keep that in mind.
Lastly, the weather in South Korea is
extremely hot right now. Hence, you do not need any jumpers or long pants. You better
to pack your bag as light as you can.
I hope you will enjoy every second in South
Korea.
Yours ,
Jay
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