▶ Your Answer : This diagram presents the way how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology gathers the latest information to make reliable weather forecasts. The ways how they collect the incoming weather information are from satellites, radars and drifting buoys, and these information turn into TV, Radio and recorded announcements. As the diagram already shows us, mainly three different types of methods are used to collect the accurate weather information and they are include satellites, radars and drifting buoys. The data from the satellite provides photos and those that photos are sent to the come into computers waiting to the broadcasting. The screens from the radar centre are also saved into the computer and then used by the broadcasting system. Thirdly the drifting buoy's synoptic charts are collected into the computer and also prepared to broadcast. And In addition, the information of satellites and radars both gives synoptic charts to the computer aside from their own analysis. That means the satellites and radars have two ways to provide the computer with data of weather forecasts. The computer which gathers all data is ready prepares to broadcast the weather forecast to the public. They are watched or listened by the public through the by the devices, such as TV newsreader, radio and recorded announcements.
As for the three devices like TV, radio and telephone, they let people obtain the weather information by themselves.
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