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It is often said that having their own’s an own home in some countries compared to renting one is crucial. There are several reasons behind this phenomenon, but I believe that the changes can be seen as a progress.
To begin with, there are some underlying reasons why some people prefer to have their own home. First of all, recently, as with a surge in house prices due to lack of housing caused by population growth, more and more people are willing to own it, although purchasing a home involves paying a large amount of money. In addition to that, in order to avoid the long-term wear and tear of their home and the feeling that it is not a really their own home, these factors might lead to desire of purchase which people want to buy.
Despite some negative effects of purchasing home, I firmly believe that this trend is mainly positive. Firstly, in general, people who have their own’s home do not have to spend their money and time. In other words, rental fee which tenants have to pay monthly and the amount of time taken by transferring to another areas can be saved, which contribute to cost reduction and having a more/extra spare time. Moreover, since those who possess their home usually tend to stay in the area in a long time, they also do not have to go through a period to adapt to their environment newly settled down environment.
In conclusion, even though possessing a house may bring about some negative effects, it is clear that most impacts on those who try to have their own home will be beneficial. Hence, this trend is most likely to continue since people are aware of the importance of owning home. (왜 긍정적인지만 적어주시면 됩니다. 추가 예측을 하는 것은 논제에서 요구된 바가 없어요. 물론 이 문장이 간간접적으로 긍정을 보인다고 할 수는 있지만, 채점관에게 이러한 추론을 맡기는 것은 좋지 않습니다.)
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