There might be contentious debates regarding the issue of whether owning a home is more important rather than renting a home. The opponent might disagree with my stand, however, I strongly believe that owning home have many positive thing rather than renting home. In this regard, I will write this essay concerning my own opinions.
It is partially true that renting home could have some merits. Firstly, for renting home, people don’t have to pay large amount of money. For example, in Korea, price of buying house is too expansive. So many people get in trouble with this problem. Solving this problem, many couples who get married soon prefer rent a house rather than buy. Furthermore, people who prefer a rent house can live in the house where more clean, prepared. Considering the statements above, the first insistence could be acceptable.
However, owning home could have positive implication on people. In general, home makes people feel comfy and cozy. It is very important because during the worktime People might have tough and hard time. After that, when people come back their home, they might want to get some good feeling throughout their family or their own furnitures in house. However, if the house is not their own but rental house, aforementioned good things might have been reduce. Moreover, People could get some anxious feeling. Because in rental house, they can not live for a long time because they have a contract with a lessor who owns the house. Pondering on aforementioned statements, it is more reasonable to take the latter view as the established opinion.
To recapitulate, notwithstanding rent a house have some advantage, I am of opinion that owning home is better than renting home.
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