There are many pros and cons of animal testing. Many of the factors are related to ethical choices such as keeping animals in captivity and using them to feel experimental drugs. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of animal experimentation.
In the current society, animal testing is variously used in diverse areas such as for cosmetics or medicines industries. And (문장을 and but so로 시작하는 것은 별로 좋지 못합니다.) it has sparked the debates about whether animal experimentation should be continued or not because some people believe it is not right to do these unethical abuses towards animals, while however others think it is needed for people’s good. This controversial issue has some advantages and disadvantages and that would be discussed in this essay.
In many countries especially in China, they strictly restrict regulate every cosmetics and drugs to should undergo animal testing. The reason for it is because if they proceed the animal experimentation they can easily know if it is harmful to living creatures and they would figure out whether it is safe or not for humans as well. Furthermore, the study which is as for studies which are really essential for human life and additional research in biological industries, we can not do the experiment towards the human in any possible chance so they argue that it is the only way to investigate further study for our better life.
It is true that animal testing can be useful to test if the medical treatment is safe or not for humans, however, there are more than 100 million animals are dying each year because of animal experimentation only in the U.S which is are an incredibly large number. Many animals are suffering even now just because they are not considered as “human” and it horribly violates animal rights. Moreover, animals can also feel pain and most of the procedures undergo testing is so much stress for the poor animals in the tiny lab, therefore, the people who have a negative feeling of animal testing believe that they should stop this unethical killing of innocent lives.
Animal experimentation which deals millions of lives, some people would think it is an immoral treatment towards animals, however, to certain whether the new medicines or new surgical techniques are safe enough, the opposite side of people would say it is sorry for animals but we cannot help stopping it. Although it shows the downward trend in animal testing nowadays if scientists keep working on biological research about the diseases and human, it will be difficult to just cease the experimentation and this controversial would never end. (논제에서는 딱 장단점만 얘기하라고 했으므로, 그것만 얘기하고 끝내시면 됩니다. 지금 지워진 부분과 같이 추가적으로 끌어올 필요는 따로 없고요.)
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