In some countries around the world men and women are having babies late in life.
What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, many couples have had babies later than at least a decade ago in some countries. I will represent some reasons about this issue and several drawbacks that come with this its situation.
First of foremost, females and males in some countries are having their babies later. This is because their marriage timing is late compared to the past and its phenomenon become more serious, and this problem leads to having a baby late in life. What is more, especially as for women, they want to be pregnant a pregnancy later for their career and those they (할로할로님은 이거 자주 틀리시는 경향이 있으니까 주의해주세요!) think that their job is a more significant factor than having a baby. Actually, it is difficult that keeping to keep their work with parenting, so a great deal of females tend to focus on their career firstly, and it is more comfortable to have a baby whenthey are prepared to do so its become more comfortable then they would prepare to pregnancy.
However, there There are some disadvantages to have babies later, for not only babies but also mothers females. Their health would be under danger able to become dangerous when babies are born and breed. It is because most people who give (give birth는 따로 외워두세요! 유학 가셔서도 많이 써먹을 표현입니다.) do late birth late would be weaker in terms of health than young women health. Furthermore, most parents want only a maximum of one or two children to their children only one or maximum two. In Korea, the survey showed the percentage of parents who do not have babies until now and they want to have only one child regardless gender. (앞에서 했던 말의반복이라 의미를 딱히 갖지는 않습니다.) This phenomenon would have a negative impact for birthrate in most not only some countries but also most of countries.
As a consequence, many marriage married couples who do not have babies so far for want to have a their child later because their marriage time is becoming late. However, this problem have has some serious effects on their health between babies and females, and its would lead to low birthrate to more and more countries.
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