The illustrated bar chart and table outline
the changes in exporting earing for a country in 5 different categories from
2015 to 2016. Overall, with the exception of agricultural products, the other
items showed a rise in exports an upward. This can be separated into two section that the main
exports and the other exports
One of the main exports was petroleum
products, it made a profit of around $60 billion in 2015 and approximately $62 billion
in 2016 respectively. It increased by only 3%. The other one was engineered
goods, which went from $58 billion to $62 billion, with an it was increment of 8.5%.
The other three items had small figures
compared to main exports. Gems and jewellery was the only one item among these
categories. It drops in sales of approximately $42 billion in 2015 and it
decreased by 5.18%. Agricultural products had a marginally change, which only rose it only rise
over 0.81%. The the category that had most growth was textiles, it went up from around
$25 billion to almost $32 billion, showing it showed an increment of 15.24%.
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