Students
should be encouraged to take part in exchange programmes in today’s globalized world.
To what
extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The
topic is saying whether students being motivated to take the exchange
programmes is right or wrong. My opinion about this topic is clearly agree. I
think it is obviously necessary to encourage students to experience class of
other culture countries.
First of all, it is important to widen
students’ horizon in this globalized world. As to be a personnel of this world,
it is so important to have a flexible mind. I think that this is the basic
attitude for living in today’s world. Second reason, as a complement of the
first reason, I think that contacting with people from various culture is
essential to be an open-mind person. Specially in Korea, Korea is yet less
globalized compared to other developed countries. Therefore, It is almost
necessary to have chances to study abroad if the students need flexibility
about other cultures.
Lastly, it could be a chance to refresh the
student’s study. I think having proper relax is very important as well as
working hard and focusing on their study. They could make oversea friends and
enjoy their abroad living. Thus, encouraging students to attend exchange
programmes are essential as the aspect of refreshing.
To
finish my assay, I agree to encourage students to take part in exchange programmes,
because refreshing by studying abroad and having the opportunity of experiencing
various culture are obviously required to students. I think exchange programmes
are the perfect way to satisfy these things. Also, There are numerous other reasons
why exchange programmes are great to students though I couldn’t mention them
all.
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