목표: 5.5 이상
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The
line graph illustrates the number of visits to and from the UK from 1979 to
1999. And the bar chart demonstrates the top five countries visited by UK
residents in 1999. Units are measured in millions.
Overall,
it is clear that the number of both UK residents going abroad and Overseas
residents visiting the UK increased significantly over the period given. Also
the noticeable was that the UK residents preferred to visit France and Spain than
others in 1999.
In
regards to the number of UK residents visiting abroad started at around 10 million
in 1979 and then increased dramatically to over 50 million in the last year,
which was approximately five times higher than the original value. Similarly,
visits to the UK by overseas residents was at 10 million in the first year but
the number of increasing was much smaller than UK residents visiting abroad,
ended at about 25 millions of people in 1999.
France and Spain were more visited by UK residents than other three countries in 1999 and the number of UK visitors was over 10 million and just under 10 million, respectively. Meanwhile, there were less than 5 million UK residents in USA, Greece, and Turkey.
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