The
bar chart shows the sales amount of various export items in one country during
2015 and 2016. Those items consist of five categories which are 'Petroleum
products', 'Engineered goods', 'Gems and jewellery','Agricultural products',
and 'Textile'. Besides, the The table indicates the extent of increase and decrease
of those five goods in percentage.
Overall,
the export earnings of all the items except for 'gems and jewellery' (1. 따옴표는 싹 빼시고, 2. 여기의 경우는 해당이 안 됐지만 다른데에는 싹 다 소문자 시작해주시면 됩니다.) increased
between 2015 and 2016. The percentage of increase was the highest in 'Textile'
while that was the lowest in 'Agricultural products'.
Looking
at the bar chart and the table more closely, it is clear that 'Petroleum
products' earned the most amount among those items both in 2015 and 2016. They The category generated more than 60 billion dollars in both
years. 'Textiles' earned around 25
billion which was the smallest amount in 2015, however, the growth rate was the
highest at 15.24% in 2006. On the other hand, the export amount of 'Gems and
jewellery' fell 5.18% which was the only minus growth among the entire categories. Meanwhile, 'Agricultural products' remained
almost unchanged in exports, increasing slightly less than 1%.
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목표 : 6.5~7.0
늘 감사합니다~
총평: (7/7/6/6) 6.5
6.5는 무난하게 받는 글이긴 합니다. 대소문자 등에서 문제가 있긴 해도, 전반적으로는 매우 깔끔한 편이었어요.
'시험장에서' task1 항목의 대소문자가 헷갈리시면 그냥 소문자로 찍으세요. 그러면 90% 이상 맞습니다. 대신 연습 단계에서는 일일히 공부해주셔야 하는데, 이는 제가 따로 체크해드리겠습니다.
수고하셨습니다 :)