A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written
to ask you for help in finding a job in your country, You have heard about a
job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her
Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it
involves
Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
explain how to apply for the job
Dear Annisa
First of all, it is late, but I want to give a word of thanks to you appreciate you. Because of thanks to your help 5 years ago, I have been doing well in Jakarta from my
college life. I am sure that this is the time to pay you back time for paid you back. I have information
about two jobs in my homeland. I will give you a brief explanation of the two jobs
in this letter. You can and review it and contact me again.
The first position is
interpretation work in a travel company. One of my uncles s is director of the
company and according to him, the company has a plan for EastWest Asia tour
package. Especially, their targets are Indonesia and Malaysia and you can speak
both languages. Moreover, I am sure that your Korean level is at the native
level and you have experience the guide
service for Korean when we were a college student. Therefore, you can utilize
experience and language skills in this job.
The other last job is the office worker of a trading company. the
company almost trade The company trades raw material and tobacco and my friend who work as an
agent of the company said that this company targets Indonesia or Vietnam. We
were MBA Indonesia students and I am sure that the knowledge from college can help
the company work. Besides, there is an advantage for you. this This one is to select
the people to work at the local branch (혹은 기타 표현). If you only work for this company for only six
months, you can work in Indonesia. In conclusion, you can work with major
knowledge and a chance to work in your hometown again if you want.
Definitely, both jobs would make you enjoy to work. If you choose
one work or have inquiries, please contact me again.
I am waiting for a good
news from you
Your friend
Youngtae Kim
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총평: (6/6/7/6) 6.5
이번 글은 평소보다 많이 아쉬웠네요. 일단 문법 문제가 갑자기 확 늘어났는데, 이는 일시적인 현상이라고 가정하겠습니다. 다음부터는 이러지 않도록 주의해주세요! 내용 관해서는 explain how to apply for the job가 정확히 설명되지 않은 상황입니다. 고로 그 정보를 추가해주실 필요가 있어요.
수고하셨습니다 :)