The pie charts illustrate the information related to the proportion of produced electricity by fuel source in France during the years 1990 and 2010, with a focus on five different sources of fuel which are oil, coal, natural gas, hydropower and nuclear power.
In general, it can be clearly observed that the usage of nuclear power (사용량이 증가했는지는 알 수 없습니다. 사용 비율의 증가만 알 수 있어요.) for generating electricity in France considerably increased throughout the whole period. Meanwhile, when it comes to natural gas, there was a huge decline. In addition, remaining other sources of fuel saw general drops. (이 표의 Overview는 그냥 '2010년에는 1990년에 비해 Nuclear power에 대한 의존도가 훨씬 높아졌다~' 라고 적고 넘기시면 됩니다. Overview는 길다고 좋은 게 아니에요.)
In 1990, the percentage of natural gas and coal accounted for 28% each. This was followed by oil Oil which had 22%. Meanwhile However, Hydro hydro power was the least used source which recored at only 6%.
As to the data for 2010, the majority of electricity was produced by a source of nuclear power, numbering 67%. The amount of Coal and Oil (소문자입니다.) consumptions dropped to 13% each and natural gas had a sharp decrease to 4%. Conversely, hydro power again tallied the smallest energy generated in 1990 (only 2%).
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크게 문제는 없었고, Overview를 간추리는 것에 대해서만 주의해주시면 될 것 같습니다. 또한 Overview의 usage관련해서는 제가 이전에 말씀드린 절대적인 수와 상대적인 비율의 구분을 다뤄주시면 돼요.
수고하셨습니다 :)