The table gives information about the how many people watch 4
different genres of films in some countries. Overall, the common thing in 4
countries is that the highest figure was seen in is action. On the other hand, with the
exception of India, the figure for romance movie is quite low small compared to
that of India.
The table indicates that people in India tend to watch in the
cinema, the total number of 4 genres is 24.5 million in India. (가장 많은 수의~~~, 혹은 이와 유사한 표현을 적어주셔야 합니다.) Like other
countries, action is most popular genre in India, which is 8 million. While Meanwhile, the
figure for horror movie is only 2.5 million. Interestingly, many people in
India like to watch romance movies but it not as popular in other countries. The
number of people who like to watch action is 7.6 million in Ireland, while, the
romance movies are not as much as popular than other movies with 3.8 million.
In New Zealand, the genre with the lowest views is comedy the lowest figure of cinema viewing is comedy
with nearly 4 million. New Zealand and Japan have same figures for the romance,
which is 4.5 million. For the Japan, not many people like watching horror
movies (2.2 million).
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목표 6.5~7
시험장에서 6.5만 나와도 좋겠네요,,
총평: (7/6/6/6) 6.5
6.5는 아슬아슬하게 맞춰질 것 같긴 한데, 대신 제가 강조드렸듯이 꼭 문법+어휘+모범답안 해주시고, 기계적인 글쓰기가 되지 않도록 일주일에 한 번 정도는 꼭 쉬어주세요! 무조건 많이 쓴다고 좋은 게 아니며, 쓰는 것보다 더 중요한(=문법+어휘) 것들도 있습니다!
수고하셨습니다 :)