The bar chart shows the UAE’s spending on health and education, presented as percentages of GDP in 1985, 1990 and 1993. The line graph describes the death rate of infants and the duration of lifetime from 1970 to 1992.
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According to the bar graph, it is evident that the proposition of investment in education sector in the UAE increased during the given period. On the other hand, the percentage of expenditure on health declined in 1990 and rose back in 1993. In detail, In roughly 10% of GDP was spent on education in 1985, while around 8% was done on health in the same year. The proposition of expenditure on education went up to more than 14% in 1990, while that on the health sector decreased to approximately 7%. In 1993, both figures of health and education inclined to around 10% and 15% respectively.
Overall, the bar graph The line graph indicates that life expectancy increased while infant mortality decreased steadily throughout the period. People were expected to live for around 60 years in 1970, and the figure rose gradually until it reached more than 70 years in 1992. Meanwhile However, the death rate of infants was approximately 70 per 1000 births, and the rate dropped dramatically reaching 20 per 1000 births in 1992.
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